Silent Confession

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I gaze into your eyes and I can see it all,
The sudden look in them is an alarming call

Your eyes say no words, yet my ears hear them shout,
They spell no language, yet my heart makes something out.

The affection your eyes reveals, so pure and unmistakable,
The confession in them, so abrupt and unpredictable.

This glorious moment is so majestic for one of all,
Said by everything when you’ve said nothing at all.

My life’s boat now floats only in your heart’s sea,
Immaculate love now we’ll share as long as eternity.

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12 thoughts on “Silent Confession

    junaid sohail said:
    October 25, 2010 at 14:19

    wah ji wah.kiya bat hay .
    aalaaa hay bot aalaa.
    asim teri poerty ma tu jado hay jado.

    Seemi said:
    October 28, 2010 at 09:27

    Very nice 🙂

    .... said:
    November 1, 2010 at 23:47


      Ans responded:
      November 1, 2010 at 23:55

      Can you kindly tell why you didn’t like this? Your comments are respectful and precious to me anyways.

    .... said:
    November 4, 2010 at 00:07

    first of all …the title pic is not …. and the poetry does not suits ur personality…it should not be ur aim only to write whatever u think but there shud be quality….i hope u dont feel it bad but kindly be conxious next time when choosing the title pic, theme and words of ur writings….thanx

      Ans responded:
      November 4, 2010 at 03:17

      im not feeling bad at all but im really surprize why it didn’t knock you; my other poem named “untitled” is more unbalance in chosing words or sentence structured; i rate my this work higher then that one; Title pic is ok someone may like or not no issue but it matches with first line of poem; theam ..ummm infact its about early day love; a new born love; all of my work has common theme .i.e. love in early days; i dont know why you find it deviated from my theme; but yes i will surly revise it to make it more perfact; your suggestions in this regard will really mean to me;

    Faisal said:
    November 6, 2010 at 16:15

    Hello ANS, i am not fond of poetry but when i read this its sounds good to me, nice work

    .... said:
    November 6, 2010 at 23:05

    u know any poetry is never meant orr understood or rated by the words …it is only the feelings true feelings and untitled has that feelings ,,i donot know y i couldnt feel that true that real in silent confession …however sorry 4 being a critic ….but untitled is really good done more thing i never compare poetries …they all are same to me i only rate them upon what i feel while reading them…so it is my view

    VLC Media Player said:
    November 13, 2010 at 08:44

    i want it

    me said:
    November 18, 2010 at 03:50


    Faisal Hayat said:
    September 20, 2011 at 13:39

    well i can feel depth of lOve in whole series of poems…..too good 🙂

      Ans responded:
      September 20, 2011 at 17:35

      much thanks for feeling the soul of the words;

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